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This is an interesting story with a message for parents everywhere. Though some of the sentences were a tad awkward, I still was engrossed in the story. Good job.
Interesting story that illustrates that breaking an oath or promise brings unwanted consequences.
07/23/13
This was an interesting story and possibly you could expand it (I know you cannot do it here due to word limitation) and bring it forward in greater detail, and perhaps it can be an article for a devotional magazine. Nicely done.

God bless~