The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/13
Transition words will help the flow of content.

Shorter paragraphs help make reading easier.

07/20/13
I really like the last paragraph about the "unexpected". The flow of the article would be better with some spacing in the paragraph and maybe setting the scripture quotes off a bit would help them be seen more clearly. Good writing. Keep it up!
07/22/13
This is a nice devotion. You make some great points backed by Scripture. The only thing I might suggest would be to expand on it a bit more. I'd love to read more about your experiences.I did think the last line was quite clever and a great note to end on. Good job.
07/23/13
Deeply profound and powerful ending. Really liked this piece.

God bless~