The Official Writing Challenge
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Easy to follow thoughts.

Nice layout.

You enjoyed doing this.
07/21/13
So beautiful. Love the very simple phrasing although the thoughts behind them are not simple at all, but very deep and mindful. Wonderful entry.
07/21/13
I like the soft tone of this poem. Punctuation would have helped - putting it where it would be used in prose. Even though you never used the word "Expect" the thought is there. It might be better to emphasize it a little stronger for the Challenge. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
07/21/13
I got so lost in the beautiful words of this one. Peace and tranquility were mine as I read your glorious directions in which to live by. I have found recently that waiting on God gives me such a sense of peace, just as your lovely poem did. You have a fine gift for writing for the Lord. Excellence in faith!
07/22/13
Loved this communing with one's soul to bring faith and encouragement to get through the day living for Jesus. Lovely devotional.
07/22/13
Very nice job! I'm glad you finally jumped in. I love how you ended it. "Wait on me." :) Something I need to always remember.
07/23/13
Engaging, lovely, powerful, peaceful, mesmerizing, and beautifully done.

Thank you! I loved this.

God bless~
Wow this is a powerful piece. It is filled with elegance and hope and touched my heart deeply.
07/25/13
This is a delightful and faith filled devotional. 'The messy gears of my mind, begin their endless grind.' I certainly identified with those lines. A powerful piece that will speak to many people. I'd like to read more of your work.