The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/13
A lot of information packed into the word count. I especially liked the last sentence.

Try to break up into paragraphs and leave spaces between for easier reading. Good job:)
07/20/13
Consistent theme.

Shorter paragraphs make for easier reading.

Short sentences can be powerful. "It is a battle!"

The words of the Holy Spirit are silent so we need to listen harder in order to hear them.
07/23/13
Lots of vital information packed into this powerful devotional. You did a nice job of bringing your thoughts and messages together with the passages, making it a beautiful read.

God bless~
07/23/13
You make some interesting points and present it in a way that most people can relate to and understand. Make sure when you quote someone that you cite it and give the author the credit in an Author's note. This doesn't add to the word count either.I really like your last line. It's a great way to end and really sums up your message. Good job.
07/27/13
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level 1! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.)