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07/19/13
This would make a good devotional. Try to make some white space between paragraphs for easier reading:)
God's promises cause us to have great "expectations". Continue to trust and use these. Good examples.

God's commands like James 1:2-4 mellows any discontent we may have during trials.

Short sentences can be powerful. (Think of "Jesus wept".

Your feeling are felt in this article.

Keep expressing how you feel with colorful words.
This is a powerful devotion. You made some outstanding points and it made me stop and examine my own thoughts.

You had some tiny things like you should write out the word Psalm and if it's a direct quote, include the version and either put the verse in italics or in quotation marks. One time you did start Heaven with a capital H and one time you didn't. Getting a good challenge buddy or critique group would help with little things like that.

I think you nailed the topic in an interesting and creative way. Your advice is great and something I really need to remember as I tend to be a big worrier. I appreciate your words and the resulting self-evaluation that I found myself doing. Great job.

07/23/13
Beautifully done. This is a moving devotional and has wonderful messages from start to end.

God Bless~