The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/13
This is a great devotion. I really liked the everyday example that you used to demonstrate your point. The only red ink I have is that you used the word wonderful several times in the last paragraph and you may want to consider trying to avoid repeating the same word. Your message, however is truly wonderful! The Scripture you chose was a perfect fit for your message. This is a thought-provoking devotional and reminds us of the miracle God performs each time he created another perfectly synchronized human. Good job!
06/17/13
This is so true. It truly is amazing how wonderfully we are created. I love the analogy made with the topic, the hum of a perfect engine (body) is excellent. Good job!