The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this devotional. I never quite thought about how singing and humming can complement each other. The only red ink I might offer would be to review some of the punctuation, especially comma rules. A good resource is Elements of style. This line: "Happiness is circumstantial and can change in a moment,"
really touched my heart. Though you only have a handful of words, they are quite profound. You did a splendid job.
06/18/13
Yes, humming often is a sign of peace. Thank you for the comforting Scriptures.
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