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Oh my! This article brings to the surface so many times I myself have gotten offended at someone I love. It reminds me how serious holding on to a grudge can be. This is serious business and that message came through loud and clear in your entry. Keep writing!
This is an interesting take on the topic. You definitely showed how something little can blossom into something huge. You need to double check for little errors like baloon instead of balloon. I'm not sure how realistic the story is as it seems like a big leap to suicide unless there was already an underlying depression. It does pack a punch though and reminds us all what can happen if we hold onto past angers. Good job.
06/11/13
WOW! I could hardly wait to read the conclusion. This was an intriguing story. I was so sad to read the tragic ending.

Wing His Words!
06/11/13
This will serve as a good reminder with a powerful message for those reading it.

Excellent job. God bless~