The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/13
I am smiling from ear to ear. The last part jolted me back a few years. I especially remember Hi ya doll! A great little story told here. Thanks for sharing.
Okay you got me good and that doesn't happen too often. As I read, I was trying to think of a nice way to suggest you cut down on the purple prose, but then I read that last line and burst out laughing. It takes a touch of genius to make overly flowery descriptions work and boy did you pull it off. The juxtaposition of the last line was brilliant. I think You did a marvelous job. You definitely covered the topic and you had me going.
06/09/13
Hahahahaha...Great job with this. Clever and totally refreshing!

God bless~
06/09/13
Hahahahaha...Great job with this. Clever and totally refreshing!

God bless~
06/10/13
Very clever. You had me until the very end. Well written1