The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/13
Good job with the topic which you nailed completely well. I appreciated the scriptures tied into the story.

God bless~
06/04/13
I thought you did a great job of sharing with us the story of your dog Bella and then tying it in with the devotion of the Israelites. Good point, we sometimes complain without even realizing it. Somehow it becomes such a bad habit to break unless we turn our eyes to the Lord and remember to praise Him for all the wonderful things He does in our own lives. Meaningful article that is really well done.
06/05/13
You do a nice job of retelling this familiar Bible story. I've read several stories about Moses this week, so it's important to have your story stand out. Though you didn't really transition the puppy part into the rest of the devotion, I did see the wisdom in both parts. I did, however, see myself both in the puppy and in the Israelites. I don't like change, but often after stomping my feet and trying to cling to the past,God shows me how wonderful change can be as long as I lean on Jesus on the way. Thanks for the great reminder.
06/06/13
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