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Topic: Whine (05/23/13)
TITLE: Caught Between the Whines
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"I love you", that's what I
read in the bible, that you
said "I love you". It simply
can't be true, my life is a mess and it
will never change.
You have forsaken me, and while
I am speaking to you,
I must say I need a miracle
so you need to stop and listen.
All my life I knew pain,
the torture I endured,
words from my mothers tongue like
beatings and lashings.
Then my father declared,
I did it all for you,
before he left me.
Call on me,
he said, but he wouldn't pick up
in the hour of need. I
was disappointed. He said he
will always be here for
me, but he isn't so I'm stuck with
If you can hear me God,
draw close to me and I will
depend on you.
Protect, watch over and care
for me, and I will live
I am always here for you, even when you don't realise it.
Read every second line of your letter, and you will see what I mean.
I love you,
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