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05/31/13
You did a great job with passages that pertain to the topic and you closed with a subtle, yet powerful line.

God bless~
This is a lovely devotion. I'm sure many could relate. You had some great Scripture verses here, but I wish you had expanded on how they influenced your life more. By pulling the reader into a glimpse of the life of the MC, it allows the reader to relate. The more personal stories shared, the greater chance the reader will have of applying the Scriptures to her life. You did a nice job of writing on topic."Do all things without complaining," says it all. It's not easy sometimes, but having that mindset can make a huge difference in our lives. Good job and a timely reminder.