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Tender hearted tale of which I enjoyed very much. Sweet and meaningful.

God bless~
This is a great story. I empathize deeply with the boy who was whining. I did notice a few little things. It took me a few times to understand your opening line, but had you added a comma after the word it, and an em dash after for, it would have flowed a bit better. Also, remember to start a new paragraph each time someone different speaks, even if it's just one word. I really liked how the older boy stepped in and put a stop to the bullying right away. This is a great message for kids and adults alike. You also did a nice job of writing on topic.