The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this. Your subtle sense of humor had me chuckling and nodding my head. My only suggestion would be in your last paragraph, you don't need the line In conclusion may I suggest. Instead, just go ahead and start with your suggestion. You did a nice concise job of picking a few scriptures and using them as a way to cover the topic while still delivering a great reminder. Good job!
05/27/13
A fun piece with some solid teaching in it. Thanks for sharing!
05/27/13
This was clever and beyond entertaining, it held an important message and meaning. Nice job!

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