The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very well written story. You can almost see the action and feel the emotions.

It's so good to have a Heavenly Father to teach us how to love our children, especially when our earthly fathers fail us. Blessings! LaVonne
The emotions come through in your descriptions. I can hear keys rattling! Good job.
Excellent writing and fabulous job with the topic. I enjoyed this immensely.

God bless~
This is a wonderful description of what it really means to know that GOD is our perfect Father who will never leave us or forsake us.
Congratulations on placing 2nd in your level and 21 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
Heartbreaking and yet thrilling at the end! Praise YHWH! Congratulations!