The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/13
I love this. It's wonderfully done. There is a great title and a wonderful message woven throughout. The pacing is good and I smiled when I reached the end, because your last line really tied it all together.

Good take on the topic and very smooth writing. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!
05/21/13
Very good read. I loved your take on the topic, your title, and the point well made.
05/21/13
Really superb job of presenting the topic. WOnderful writing here!

God bless~
Wow this is powerful. You did a wonderful job with this and what a great message too.
05/23/13
Wow, this is excellent. You do a great job showing, not just telling, all throughout, and end it beautifully. What a message and how convicting!
Congratulations on placing 1st in your level and 20 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards)
Compelling! Praise YHWH! Congratulations!
Congrats on your 1st place win!
05/27/13
Fantastic devotional and reminder of the enemies persistence and God's provision.
Congratulations on you 1st place win!