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05/19/13
What a lovely little devotional. I'm definitely with you on the rattling of a rattlesnake's tail. I never want to be on the end where I'm hearing that one. Thanks for sharing!
05/20/13
Give your fear to the Lord and come enjoy a rattlesnake roundup in Texas, maybe even eat a fried rattlesnake burger. Just kidding you, but we do those things here. Enjoyed the devotional. Well done.
05/21/13
I liked the title and the truth you illustrated. I hope we'll be more alert to God's "rattles" and warnings. Good job.
05/21/13
Timely reminder for all Christians and His children overall. Good message, nicely done.

God Bless~
05/21/13
This is a good devotion. I like how you started out with sharing your fears. It helps to pull the reader in.

Some of your sentences are a bit awkward. A good thing to do is have someone read it aloud and if they stumble, then you might want to reword it a bit. For example this line: If we are not faithful to do this, God will hold us responsible for what happens to them.
could be changed to this: If we neglect his people, then God will hold us responsible for them.
I reworked it about four or five times and it still isn't perfect but I hope it shows you what I mean.

You did a nice job of writing on topic while delivering an important message that can be easy to forget in this day where everyone is so busy. Nice job.
05/23/13
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