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05/18/13
This makes me empathize with you. I would like to hear the rest of the story, however,
about the man you love.
05/21/13
Dreams can indeed be this real and rattling. I do like the point about having hope and peace, whether battling dreams or reality. Vivid images and interesting piece.
05/22/13
This was an interesting approach to the topic, and you nailed that perfectly. Nicely done, good conclusion pulling it together nicely.

God bless~
05/23/13
This is an interesting story about the dream and the scriptural lesson you intertwine with it. It think it would make an excellent devotional.

I too, however, would have enjoyed hearing more about the man you love.
05/23/13
I liked how this showed how a relationship with one person can rattle and almost consume us, our thoughts, dreams, etc..
Then tying in the scripture / lesson at the end. I also think its a great devotional.