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This makes me empathize with you. I would like to hear the rest of the story, however,
about the man you love.
Dreams can indeed be this real and rattling. I do like the point about having hope and peace, whether battling dreams or reality. Vivid images and interesting piece.
This was an interesting approach to the topic, and you nailed that perfectly. Nicely done, good conclusion pulling it together nicely.

God bless~
This is an interesting story about the dream and the scriptural lesson you intertwine with it. It think it would make an excellent devotional.

I too, however, would have enjoyed hearing more about the man you love.
I liked how this showed how a relationship with one person can rattle and almost consume us, our thoughts, dreams, etc..
Then tying in the scripture / lesson at the end. I also think its a great devotional.