The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/13
Nice title. I like how it ties in at the end. You had some great images here, such as the detail of death having its own rattle. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing!
05/17/13
Your poem is one that gave a great description of the variety of things that rattled. It tied in really well with the Alpha and the Omega. Thank you for sharing your talent and thoughts in rhythm. God Bless.
05/21/13
From baby rattle to death rattle was a good way to illustrate your title. I liked that, and the way you covered so many perspectives in between.
05/22/13
So much packed into this powerful and meaningful poem. Nicely done. Thanks.

God bless~
05/23/13
Great rhymes in this and I so enjoy the fact that you mentioned so many different ways people can be rattled. Great message at the end too about the Alpha and Omega!