The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/13
How fun! Sometimes it's quite impossible to keep that sneeze behind bars. Nice touch of humor. I liked it.

Verse three was my favorite, I think. You had some lovely details in there. Thanks for sharing! :)
05/17/13
I thought your poem was fun and I loved the rhythm in your poem that helped me to visualize the sound of the drops of rain on the pane. Well done.
05/21/13
I could almost see and feel the rain, and it makes for a great time to meditate. Good descriptions.
05/22/13
This was clever, fun, and meditative at once. Nicely done. God bless~