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05/16/13
Very nicely done. I enjoyed the little story you had woven through the verses. I also liked the detail of the horse.

One little question--did you mean rattled and raddled? or was that just a typo? I know rattled was for the topic, but raddle has an entirely different meaning. Just a thought.

I really liked the imagery near the end, with the lines of how sometimes God shakes us up to make us remember that we're not the only ones here. Thanks for sharing! :)
05/21/13
God does indeed use the rattling things in life to turn us to Him if we let Him. That point is woven throughout your poem, and I liked that.
05/22/13
Good flow in this retrospective poem, and I enjoyed the message that it brought forward.

God bless~
Beautiful, Cinda. My heart is hugging yours . . .