The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/13
Okay, a very nice story, and a situation all parent probably go through. Some nit picking on dialog, but nothing to worry about. The grammar folks make make a comment, but for me, this was well done.
05/11/13
Excellent message with a profound commentary on the world of today. Nicely done.

God bless~