The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/13
Okay, I hope the judges smile on this little essay, I loved it. The opening was a bit confusing, maybe I got a negative vibe by the abundance of snow paragraph, but you cleared it up - you weren't complaining. Good Job. Keep writing, I want to read more of your work.
05/10/13
This was a joy to read and certainly a creative way to bring forth the topic. I especially liked that only used "sizzle" one time.

That was enough to convey the fundamentally positive and uplifting message that your piece delivered.

Nicely done!

God bless~
05/10/13
This was a joy to read and certainly a creative way to bring forth the topic. I especially liked that you only used "sizzle" one time.
That was enough to convey the fundamentally positive and uplifting message that your piece delivered.

Nicely done!

God bless~



This is a great essay. It reminds me of my home in Western NY Just when the flowers start blooming it snows! But like you pointed out, we can choose what to focus on. Congratulations on ranking 11 in your level! The highest rankings are on the message boards.