The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/13
Interesting Allegory. Learn to write dialog such that each speaker has their own paragraph. I think you are on your way .... keep writing.
05/10/13
Great entry! I enjoyed this so much...you did a nice job of tying Biblical accounts into the topic with ease.

This was well done!

God bless~
Very interesting and good storyline, It kept me motivated to read throughout!
Good job!
Congratulations on ranking 9 in your level and 30 overall!