The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/05
So many truths! thank you..this was very good.
11/15/05
Good job! You hit on a lot of "everyday" images and thoughts that many may not think of as beautiful. I especially liked the reminder: "When we try to run from who he designed us to be, we can smile knowing that heíll always bring us back to being his creation." Thanks for writing!
11/19/05
Truth though everyday images. The "As" for the opening slowed the overall read, make it more active. You have something say, continue to work.