The Official Writing Challenge
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Intense and gripping. I could picture the characters easily from your excellent narrative. Great writing!
Chilling! Powerful! You are a good storyteller. Well done!
You did an outstanding job of pulling the reader into the story. Usually an angel appearing in a dream can be a literary device that is overused and tired but you handled it in a fresh way, and kept me hanging on to every word. Great job.