The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/13
Good job. I'd call this poetical prose. Have you ever tried poetry? I think you'd be good at it.
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This is really lovely. You really grabbed my heart with the line each drip represents each heart saved. My only suggestion would be to not use the word drip as much, sometimes you can still be on topic without ever using the topic word. You did a splendid job though and this is an intense piece.