The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/13
Great writing. Suspenseful story with a good ending. Don't forget to space between paragraphs. Other than that, I enjoyed this very much! Keep writing.
05/06/13
This is very suspenseful. It helps to leave a second space between paragraphs to make it easier to read. This would be a good YA story.
What's a YA story?