The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/13
Very good writing here. You have a way with words and description. I enjoyed this. Keep writing!
05/06/13
Nice job in showing the joy of hearing the rain. Although, it doesn't seem to fit the thought in your devotional part. It might be better to either talk of God's "showers of blessing" or to use the description of an irritating dripping faucet or leak.
Keep writing. You've got some good thoughts here.