The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/13
Made me smile and brought tears to my eyes at the same time. Beautiful poem of the life of a man, a good man. Excellent!
05/04/13
Very good, and true.
05/06/13
Your poem is beautiful it brought tears to my eyes while you took us through each step of his life. He must of been a wonderful man. Very well done!
What a 'short' but powerful poem! Congratulations for placing second in level one!
Oh I love how you really let me connect with the MC in such a powerful way. And to do it from beginning to end in verse yet. Amazing. Congratulations on your ribbon and for ranking 13th overall! (So close to that EC! Keep at it and you will reach it in no time:))