The Official Writing Challenge
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04/25/13
"Centrals never busy, always on the line, You can talk to Jesus always all the time.
Great personalizing of Gods way of answering prayers, some right away and some waits for awhile. Keep Writing!
04/26/13
I loved this. God is never busy to hear our heart's cry!
Unique perspective . . .

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I love this! I think it was quite creative and clever. I could easily picture God manning many lines all at once. You had some tiny errors like remember to start a new paragraph each time that a new person speaks, but that all can be fixed with a good proofreader. I really did enjoy this story. I thought you covered the topic in a cute way while delivering an important message.
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