The Official Writing Challenge
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Manners are an important concept so underappreciated in today's society.
I love animal stories. Your's left me with a big smile. A few cute illustrations would be perfect for this poem.
Sweet little turtle tale . . .
This is a sweet story. I couldn't help but to fall in love with the little turtle. Remember to start a new paragraph each time someone different speaks. You may want to use that part to put some more action in and give the reader a peek into the MC's personality. For example Henry guzzled his orange juice.This is a nice idea to show kids manners. Congratulations on ranking 14 in a very competitive level one!