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11/14/05
Wow! What imagery! Being ushered into God's presence is like living inside joy for me. Good thoughts. Expand the piece and it could be used as a devotional:)
11/15/05
Wonderful turns of phrase and beautiful imagry - I agree you really should expand on this and give it room to grow. Make use of paragraphs too, but lovely use of words: the love shines through this. God bless.
11/15/05
Wonderful descriptions and imagery, the 2nd. person imperative turned it into a sermon topper. Thanks for posting.
11/22/05
This is Beautiful Arnette, a “Residency Called Beautiful”
“As you stand in awe of the moment suddenly but gently you feel yourself being lifted up and mighty arms embracing you. As you have just been carried through the threshold , through the Door, of an never ending relationship with the one who has prepared your palace as His residency called beautiful.” Thank you. Blessings. Helen