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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Beautiful (11/07/05)

TITLE: Residency Called Beautifu
By Annette Harris
11/07/05


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The first gleam of dawn has just peeked over the mountains shining ever brighter till the full light of day as you walk up the pathway. Beautiful flowers in all different colors, shapes, and size line a formation of unity. The sweet aroma fills the air as a gentle breeze blows. The flowing water from a fountain stream echos cords of instruments as each step you take flows into rhyme with the same beat. A crown of beauty adorns you head, your hair if like royal tapestry, your staure is like that of the palm standing ever so erect. Arrayed in fine white linen without stain or wrinkle or any other blemish, You are the model of perfection and beauty in the eyes of your beloved. Waiting for the moment to come your heart is being filled with an unconditional love you have never felt before. Love as strong as death that cannot be killed by time or disaster a love that cannot be bought for any price because it is freely given. It burns like blazing fire like a mighty flame within your heart. This love you feel is priceless. Not even the richest king in the world can buy you this kind of love. Many waters cannot quench it , rivers cannot wash it away. This love has embrassed your most inter being. From the souls of your feet to the tip of your head you have been engulfed by a love only one can give. He has choosen you as His bride. As you stand in awe of the moment suddenly but gently you feel yourself being lifted up and mighty arms embracing you. As you have just been carried through the threshold , through the Door, of an never ending relationship with the one who has prepared your palace as His residency called beautiful.


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Garnet Miller 11/14/05
Wow! What imagery! Being ushered into God's presence is like living inside joy for me. Good thoughts. Expand the piece and it could be used as a devotional:)
Alexandra Wilkin11/15/05
Wonderful turns of phrase and beautiful imagry - I agree you really should expand on this and give it room to grow. Make use of paragraphs too, but lovely use of words: the love shines through this. God bless.
dub W11/15/05
Wonderful descriptions and imagery, the 2nd. person imperative turned it into a sermon topper. Thanks for posting.
Helen Harris11/22/05
This is Beautiful Arnette, a “Residency Called Beautiful”
“As you stand in awe of the moment suddenly but gently you feel yourself being lifted up and mighty arms embracing you. As you have just been carried through the threshold , through the Door, of an never ending relationship with the one who has prepared your palace as His residency called beautiful.” Thank you. Blessings. Helen