The Official Writing Challenge
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04/23/13
Some strong editing and this fun piece will shine brightly. Thanks for posting.
04/23/13
Fun piece - was a bit hard to follow with the missing punctuation, but that can be fixed easily enough. Thanks!
04/24/13
Interesting and entertaining. A bit of red ink: I believe you meant "which" when you posted "witch".