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This is an interesting story. You do a nice job of building the suspense. It may just be my tired brain but it took me a few reads to truly understand what was going on. As a former maternity nurse, I smiled at the part about the baby being born after a series of sneezes. I've taken care of some moms who did have it that easy at childbirth and many more who wished they could. Your story shows how faith in Jesus can accomplish so many amazing things. It's a great reminder for us to remember that even today, God is still performing miracles.
04/23/13
Great story.
A beautiful, engrossing and satisfying story. Thank you.