The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a really cute take on the fairy tale. I've done some similar things and know how difficult it can be so I commend you for trying.

I noticed some sentences were missing punctuation and some were a tad confusing. For example you say the princess didn't want to risk kissing another toad but then in the next line that she was desperate enough to go for the scraggly toad. This is a tiny detail too, but toads and frogs are two different things.

Overall, I think you did s nice job. You really managed to get the privileged personality of the princess down. I like your moral of the story too. You have a few nice underlying messages in this adorable tale as well. I think you did a nice, fresh, and fun take of writing on topic.
04/23/13
Cute story. Fun.
Adorable! I love this . . .
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