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04/16/13
Lovely story. Hopefully that little boy got saved, as did other children. You have an important job. Good descriptions. Thank you.
Sweet and charming. I feel your heart and thank you for your service to the little ones . . .
04/17/13
God bless you for teaching the little ones, God's word...such a rewarding job.

Great job with imagery, and for the important message this brought forward.

God bless~
This is a great devotion. I really liked how you started with something most anyone can understand--a child hungering for love. Your prayer was the perfect conclusion to this devotion. Congratulations on ranking 13 in level one! (The highest rankings can be found in the message boards)