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04/12/13
Oh, what a gripping story showing Mary's take on her life with Jesus and how she must have felt at His crucifixion! That SPLASH! at the end took me by surprise, as a splash should. You did a great job with this.
04/15/13
Powerful. Very well done, and well written.

Good job. God bless~
Wow. Most excellent. I felt I was Mary, enduring the most horrendous loss a mother could ever imagine. Thank you for taking me into her ravaged heart.
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A very evoking piece of writing, I walked with this woman....