The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a thought-provoking piece. You do a great job weaving the teacher's instructions with Allie's artwork on the canvas. I like the way you ended it, pointing to Jesus' shed blood on the cross, the stripes that soothe our pain and make us whole.
There was so much depth to the ideas in your story. I like how the piece of writing painted Allie's life picture.
This is a hauntingly beautiful story that shows snippets of a life done on a canvas background.

The piece was well constructed from beginning to end. I really like how the Savior's red blood was introduced at the end as a way of showing redemption.

This piece tugged at my heart.
This multi-layered piece held so many messages, and was well written. I enjoyed it, and the way it was wrapped up. Good job.

God bless~
The depth of feeling in Allie comes through very clearly. I like the way you related each piece of the painting to specific incidents in Allie's past. I was captivated by the story from the beginning, and I had no idea where you were going with it until the very end. Beautiful.
Gut wrenchingly poignant and beautiful . . .
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