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04/11/13
Very creative. I like the message and the pattern.
04/12/13
Very unique and creative. A fresh look and the poem is beautiful.
04/12/13
Wow, this says it all. Your splash of colors tells everything Jesus did for us. I sense a winner here.
04/14/13
I liked this splash of color. It is so true.
04/15/13
This was simply beautiful, and so mesmerizing. It touched my heart.

Great job. God bless~
This is really quite lovely. Your lines flowed easily and you had some great descriptions.

I'm not sure if the lines before were to help the spacing. It distracted me slightly. I know there us a HTML code so that you can center your poems. If you go to the FAQ on the message boards, I think there is a thread that tells how to do all of those neat things.

I think your take on the topic was quite creative and fresh. You also told the best story ever told with such delightful rhythm. Your message of hope is a great one.

04/17/13
I think that the poem was formed in the shape of a cross.