The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/13
Very beautiful work! I'm normally not a fan of poetry, but this was awesome.

The only critique I can give is a few capitalization errors.

Very well done!!
03/17/13
Powerful, compelling and moving.

God bless~
Beautiful. Stirring, Powerful. I truly enjoyed this . . .