The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/13
I really liked how you lead into your poem. Well done.
I LOVE this!
Hebrews 10:26-31
Well done, Like your introduction and the depth of the poem .
03/17/13
Loved the opening and the powerful prayer closing.

God bless~
This is really lovely. I felt like you had been peeking into my mind, right down to my real blurry vision.

I know punctuation can be a style choice in poetry, but I did stumble on "look at the Christian," they often say
and if you had added the quotes and comma, I don't think I would have stumbled.

I do think this is a heart-felt prayer. I love how you lay your raw emotions out to share with the world, knowing Jesus will protect them. Congratulations on ranking 8th in level one!
03/23/13
I read one time, I wish I could remember who said it, that when he died, he wanted his name to be forgotten and all glory be to God.

This writing and prayer, really reminded me of that. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I love to read other's prayers, especially ones so sweet!

To God be all Glory!