The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/13
Beautiful poem.
So powerful. Are you really a beginner? This is remarkable.
awesome, moved me emotionally,well written
03/17/13
Great job with this moving and prolific poem.

God bless~
03/18/13
I'm no poetry expert, by any means, but I thoroughly enjoyed this. Keep writing!
I am glad you threw a brick for this timely entry. Great job. You have talent.
03/18/13
I agree, you do indeed have talent and a way of telling a story in poetry form. Thank you so much for sharing the deep, emotional, caring piece. Great job!
03/18/13
Nicely done.
03/19/13
Your poem is very good indeed in its meter and rhyme and its message. Keep writing poetry. You have a talent for this.
This is beautiful. You do such a great job of arranging your words into a beautiful piece of art.
Congratulations on ranking 2 in your level and 13 overall! (The highest rankings can be found in message boards)
03/23/13
Congratulations on your 2nd place ribbon and 13th overall! It truly was very moving.