The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful poem.
So powerful. Are you really a beginner? This is remarkable.
awesome, moved me emotionally,well written
Great job with this moving and prolific poem.

God bless~
I'm no poetry expert, by any means, but I thoroughly enjoyed this. Keep writing!
I am glad you threw a brick for this timely entry. Great job. You have talent.
I agree, you do indeed have talent and a way of telling a story in poetry form. Thank you so much for sharing the deep, emotional, caring piece. Great job!
Nicely done.
Your poem is very good indeed in its meter and rhyme and its message. Keep writing poetry. You have a talent for this.
This is beautiful. You do such a great job of arranging your words into a beautiful piece of art.
Congratulations on ranking 2 in your level and 13 overall! (The highest rankings can be found in message boards)
Congratulations on your 2nd place ribbon and 13th overall! It truly was very moving.