The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/13
Powerful writing!
Breathtaking!
03/17/13
Hauntingly beautiful.

God bless~
I think this is a brilliant bit of poetry. I think the allegory and visualization of a real surgery paired perfectly with the Bible verse. I think you really have an out of the box idea here and I enjoyed it.
Congratulations on ranking 4 in your level and 20 overall!