The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/05
My encouragement would be to put spaces between
your paragraphs. It would be easier to read.
I did appreciate your thoughts on singing and to whom we sing. Keep writing.
11/08/05
I would have liked to hear that--but I don't think they'd let me in...good job capturing the moment for us womenfolk.
11/10/05
Thanks for sharing this experience. This is a great perspective to keep in mind at church on Sunday mornings, too! See you there! ;-}
11/12/05
A wonderful experience - some spacing between paragraphs would make for an easier read.