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I agree, but for one point: I love the French accent. Of course it depends upon who is speaking it, yes? A good write - interesting and lively.

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I think you did a nice job on this essay. You definitely covered the topic. I'm not sure if I agree that the French have a vulgar accent, as that word brings a totally different picture to my head, perhaps harsh might have been more fitting. I think if you went back and counted how many times you use the word accent, you'll be surprised. I'll sometimes challenge good writers to write on topic without using the topic word. It's not easy but there are some great examples in levels three and four. Overall, I think you did a nice job on this piece. You make some great points and I always like it when a story makes me think and yours did just that. Nicely done.
03/05/13
I enjoyed this reflective piece. It had a wonderful message. Nicely done.
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03/05/13
Excellent use of the word accent throughout. I don't agree that the French accent is vulgar, but maybe some of their language might be (My Spanish teacher also thought the French language harsh. However, when my friend was reading a poem in French, it sounded very charming.