The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
The beginning of the story really drew me in. The epic was creatively written.

For me the story held the reader captive. I would have continued with the story instead of adding the poems to the story element.

The title, "Keeper of the Keys" was a great way to get us to read the story.
02/23/13
Powerful writing! Nicely done. God bless~
02/23/13
Catchy Title! I could not pull myself away from this story, It really flowed. Thanks and God Bless!
02/25/13
This is a fascinating story. Because of my illness, I often have a hard time forgetting parts of the Bible, but you brought this back to me and I delighted in it and its wisdom. I think you did a wonderful job of keeping true to the scripture and balancing the poem with the story. I think you covered the topic in a fascinating and fresh way.
02/25/13
I try not to read comments before i comment. It's funny how people differ, personally I liked the poems. It made me think of a play where in between the acts, they will give a synopsis. :)
02/28/13
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!
02/28/13
Congratulations on your 6th place finish!