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Topic: Key (02/14/13)
TITLE: He Probably Saw Our Shoes!
By Gail Burks
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Tim and Rudy, both twelve, were trying not to giggle. Frequently, they watched him walk the few blocks to the grocery store and back.
“He still walks when there is snow on the ground. Can you believe that?”
Rudy replied, “My question is, what does he buy at the store every day?” rolling his eyes.
As Jensen faded from sight, both boys decided try to look through the frosted window on the side of the house. They've tried before, but could never see inside.
But, that particular day, as the snowflakes fell, the boys were emboldened.
“Maybe, the back door is open. Let's try.” Rudy urged his friend.
“We can't do that! Suppose someone's home?”
“He lives alone, my mom said.”
Walking back toward the front, Rudy remembered seeing Jensen lift up that flower pot one time. “Let's look under that,” pointing to the corner.
Galloping up the front stairs, Tim wondered why all of a sudden, there were no cars, no people, and a white cloud seemed to envelope the house.
“I-I-I don't know about this. If we're caught, we're toast.”
“Stop worrying, Tim. Check out the flowerpot.”
The boys looked at the antique, earth-toned pot, containing cold, matted dirt and a few dead stems. A rocking chair sat adjacent to it.
As the snow dusted the porch, ever so slightly, Tim realized their movements would leave tracks. Jensen would certainly know someone had been on the porch.
“We're screwed. Our footprints will show.”
“Come on, Tim. He won't notice. He's old.”
Tim tried to lift the pot, but the woolen gloves made it difficult to grasp.
“Give me a hand.”
They squatted, gently tilting the object. Then, they noticed something shiny.
“Is that what I think it is? Rudy exclaimed. “Let's try it.”
“This isn 't a good idea. We just can't go into someone's home like that. That's breaking in.”
“Not if you have a key, it isn't.”
So, the boys walked to the front door and glanced down the street. No sign of Jensen.
“All we'll do is open the door and look fast. I bet you a Snickers bar the place looks like a dump,” Rudy feeling confident.
As Tim placed the key in the door lock, he noticed the door was new. That's interesting, he thought.
Tim opened the door slowly. “Wow. This place looks like a magazine!”.
Rudy, checking his watch said, “Hey, we've got 5 minutes. Hurry up.”
Entering the home, they decided to remove their shoes.
Looking around, they were awestruck. The décor was warm and inviting -- earth tones, artwork, Italian leather sofa, custom draperies, and thick, cream colored, plush carpeting.
As they moved toward the kitchen, they noticed a 3-pc dinette, marble countertops, and new appliances. The kitchen beautiful and immaculate.
“This is so amazing. I never would have thought his house was so cool.” Rudy was beside himself.
With mouths open wide in amazement, they eyed the huge bookcase, wall mounted TV, including a PlayStation , and an end table with a glass chess set.
All of a sudden, they heard the front door open.
“Oh, no,” Tim whispered. “What do we do?”
“Sneak out. When he goes upstairs, we'll run out the front.”
“Yeah, but he saw our shoes.” Tim sighed.
“Hello-o—o, who's there?”
Tim and Rudy stepped out in view of Mr. Jensen.
“Uh-h-h, it's Tim and Rudy. From down the street.”
“I thought I saw you earlier. Do you have my key?”
“Yes, sir.” said Tim opening his hand. “We're very sorry. Are you calling the police?”
“No. But, YOU will call your parents. They'll have to come and get you.”
“In the meantime, would you like some cocoa?”
“Sure, thanks,” Tim spoke up quickly. Rudy sat motionless.
“I have some cookies, too.”
“You know, boys, I prayed for a chance to talk to someone today
about Jesus. The Lord has answered my prayers.”
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