The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Oh, I loved this! It made me get teary-eyed. Nicely done. Thanks.

God bless~
02/23/13
Very touching story. Teary-eyed here too.
02/24/13
Wow! This is a powerfully written story. We often overlook the treasure that God has waiting for our lives.

We only have to ask.
Oh this is a beautiful story. You did such a nice job of developing the characters. Probably everyone can relate to the idea of trying to run from pain, but it follows you wherever you go, as does God. Pretty special huh? I'm sure you have touched many hearts that have been hurting far too long with this touching story.
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