The Official Writing Challenge
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02/23/13
Very good points in this short, yet long on meaning entry. I like how you realized that "speaking to God" about all things is really important. It's like having a "sit down" with your dad, and telling him things you did. Well, God is our Father and He loves hearing from His children.

Nicely done. I enjoyed this. Keep talking to God, I know I do!

God bless~
I love this little piece. You did such a nice job of sharing parts of your life that will help those who read this. The only suggestion I have is break it into smaller paragraphs and double space between them.
I was touched by your relationship with Jesus. It's a great example for others.